Very cool prologue, many choices and options... and texts are greats. I love all of that, thank for your job! I hope a update soon, but thanks for the experience
usually i dislike stories that start out from someone else's pov but yours pleasantly surprised me, i like how you incorporated character customization into it
It's wonderful to see that you're still active. I love the updates and the additions made to the prologue. Each of the branches is so well done and I love the changes in the text depending on the personality and route (with Odile) that is chosen. I'm impressed with the branching available from just the prologue. My personal favorite is the fiery personality with an antagonistic Odile path since it allows us to clearly see the conflict between Odile and the MC due to Rothenbard.
I also adore the POVs that we've been offered so far for Leir and Odile. The pressure being placed on Leir as the future ruler and their still existing attachment to MC (which I'm sure will have more complexity to it if you choose an MC with a personality that was similar to Leir's father or a fiery personality that tested Leir's patience). Then, there is the conflict within Odile, who is struggling with the guilt over what Rothenbard did and their inability to do anything as well as the emotions that MC is stirring in them.
gODS the only complaint I have is that I can't binge this all in one go yet! The writing is so good, I love the customization and the feel I've gotten from the story already! Def gonna keep an eye on this! <33
* screams in lowercase * Ohh this is so so so wonderful! The amount of care on the instructions and all is so user friendly with the hinted symbol and all. The story is fantastic and the way my face dropped when I found out I hve arrived to the end of this wonderful story! I'm so so relieved this is not abandon! I can't wait! Have the most amazing day :))))
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I like this loose retelling quite a bit, it has a more personal haunting to it that is lip smacking good. I hope this is still being updated!
Very cool prologue, many choices and options... and texts are greats. I love all of that, thank for your job! I hope a update soon, but thanks for the experience
ngl. kinda throwing a fit lolol i love this so muccchhhh
I love Swan Lake, and now THIS?? I love it too!!
What an intriguing and captivating demo, looking forward to the update! And Odile is quite a sweetheart ;A;
your writing is beautiful ✨️
usually i dislike stories that start out from someone else's pov but yours pleasantly surprised me, i like how you incorporated character customization into it
It's wonderful to see that you're still active. I love the updates and the additions made to the prologue. Each of the branches is so well done and I love the changes in the text depending on the personality and route (with Odile) that is chosen. I'm impressed with the branching available from just the prologue. My personal favorite is the fiery personality with an antagonistic Odile path since it allows us to clearly see the conflict between Odile and the MC due to Rothenbard.
I also adore the POVs that we've been offered so far for Leir and Odile. The pressure being placed on Leir as the future ruler and their still existing attachment to MC (which I'm sure will have more complexity to it if you choose an MC with a personality that was similar to Leir's father or a fiery personality that tested Leir's patience). Then, there is the conflict within Odile, who is struggling with the guilt over what Rothenbard did and their inability to do anything as well as the emotions that MC is stirring in them.
I look forward to any future updates ^^
Thank you so much for your kind words! I hope the update will not disappoint, have a nice day xx
Delighted to see your message that this is still active. Excited!
I am leading towards Odile more He's so cute and sweet <3 but i also like the prince too
I cant wait for more! i hope this story will be continued. :)
I hope the author is doing okay! I still come back to replay this every once and a while :)
I love the game but its been 4 years...
the project isn't abandoned.
the author is just having writers block and feels burnt out.
finally an IF where I can be bitter and hateful
hope it gets updated soon!
Do you have an expected date at when the next update gonna be posted?
Is this still being continued or has it been abandoned?
Is this on hold or not continuing?
gODS the only complaint I have is that I can't binge this all in one go yet! The writing is so good, I love the customization and the feel I've gotten from the story already! Def gonna keep an eye on this! <33
gorgeous! can't wait for the next update, your writing is fantastic! <3
when is there gonna be another update?? take your time though this story is amazing
Working on it :D Thank you for reading!!
thanks for replying and i hope you have an amazing week : )
Oh man this was one of the best things I've read in a while. If this was a full game I'd buy it in a heart beat.
i love it can’t wait for an update
pronouns and gender are sold (selected) seperatley.
Oh thank you!
* screams in lowercase * Ohh this is so so so wonderful! The amount of care on the instructions and all is so user friendly with the hinted symbol and all. The story is fantastic and the way my face dropped when I found out I hve arrived to the end of this wonderful story! I'm so so relieved this is not abandon! I can't wait! Have the most amazing day :))))